The scent of a woman,
that specific woman;
Torn clothes,
and the cluttered linen;
Prove the night we had.
The moan that buried, beneath
the fluttering window drapes;
The bite marks,
and the nail marks;
The battle marks of making out.
Dead on one’s feet, after
a battle of fire and ice;
Burning in desire was pleasing,
so was melting to the core;
All before I close my eyes.
and the sea breeze,
pleased me indeed, but
distraction needs something more,
than her towel wrapped soul.
With another smile,
and another kiss,
she fades away from sight;
As I dissolve in the fantasy,
Of the night we had.
- Justin Nen
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Nice fantasy..!!
ReplyDeleteNice fantasy..!!
ReplyDeleteNice script
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ReplyDeletehey...just read your poem now...not to get in the way of creative expression or anything...but do you think u can change the word 'women' in your poem to 'woman' ? if that was an intentional mistake...then i take back what i said.
ReplyDeletebut otherwise very good writing...nice use of words and you communicated a very personal thought quite effectively...
Poetical fantasy
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